Hey Readers,
This week our create task was to make an DLO about the book you have chose but you need to do your own story with the same moral. My book title is called The little boy and the sea and the book I read was rata and the tree. The book is about a man who wants his people to be safe from the battle of the wind god and the sea god. So he was searching a perfect tree to make a boat for days and finally he finds one and started cutting it when he came back the next day the tree was back fixed and he kept on doing this every day and every day it turns back the same way it was before and one day he was watching while the creatures did some magic and fixed it back with an anger he said why did you do this? by saying this he left. The next day he couldn't believe his eyes and the eagle said this surprise is for you but remember whenever you cut or use things you need to thank it. The surprise was a long huge boat. I chose to depict this way because I thought it would be easier to understand. Our focus/We Are Learning To use prior knowledge and information from the text to create something new. Comment down below your suggestions. I made the mom faint because the water is poisonous.
Hi Joshvaa, Your story was really coll but I don't understand why the little boys mum fainted. Why did you make it on a Little boy who gets water for him mum. And it reminds me of my create task about the Forest to desert its about a guy who leaves his campfire lighted and goes away and the camp fire burn all of the trees and after 2 years it turns into a desert.
ReplyDeleteHi Jeevit,
DeleteI made the boy's mum faint because the water was poisonous. Only if you thank it will turn pure.
Hi joshvaa
ReplyDeleteIt's your friend from last year :D thank you for the message that you showed me on my EDC/on my blog to find you :D , Also i love the message you wrote about ''you should thank anything before you use it''. by the way keep up the good work! :)
Hi Casey,
DeleteI really miss you and I really want to come to hornby high. Thank you. How is our friends.
their doing good! :)
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ReplyDeleteHi Joshvaa
ReplyDeleteI can see you have worked really hard on this task, great work, but I do feel the same as Jeevit that it is a little difficult to understand that the water is poisonous. I like this moral as we should all be grateful for all the wonderful things we have and not take things for granted. Well done Joshvaa.
Michelle
Hi Michelle,
DeleteI will correct it next time,
Thanks and Regards Joshvaa.
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DeleteHi Gnana,
DeleteThanks.
hi joshvaa it's gnana why don't do 8 slides and why don't you put speac babul .
ReplyDeleteHi Gnana,
DeleteWhat I can't understand anything. Next time write it clear. Thanks
HI Joshvaa I like the part when the
ReplyDeleteboy saw the sea b monster and i like the
animation by Athan happy
If any thing is wrong
ReplyDeletei am sorry
HI Athan,
DeleteI Will not take it serious if it is not right. Thanks Joshvaa
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