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Thursday, October 29, 2020

Writing This Week !!!!!!

 Hey Readers,

This week Monday It was public holiday and on Wednesday it was our athletics day and I went to the zones. This week our task was to write a narrative or something about the picture they have given us from Pobble 365. 

Here is mine

One morning when I woke up, I saw my friends chatting about The Fish Island which I was curious to know more about. My friend told me that there’s a massive, gigantic fish and on top of it was an Island where some people lived which made me research more about it and visit it at least once. When I searched for it, I was fully blank and I could see the real picture of the fish. When I first looked at the picture it made me think that it’s a Mackerel and then I realized that it was a Tarakihi. Then in a fraction of an hour, I started to pack my things up and head over there. I stowed onto some old boat and I floated till I reached there. I smell the stinky and disgusting water. I was feeling very sad and worried for the fish. Then after 5 days staying there, I discovered that the problem was the fish could fly but the wings of the fish were hurtled very seriously. The more heavier it carried the more painful it was. After 3 days I said to the council to tell the people to vacate that place for 2 years. Then in about 2 days the place was emptied. Immediately, I started to break down the houses and destroy the whole place. Then 4 days later things were done. The only thing I needed to do was to heal the fish’s wings. But suddenly the fish started to move and it went up in the air like a hot air balloon. My heartbeat was fast. I mumbled please leave me on the ground. Then finally it landed back to the place it was stuck on and relieved me and flew back again. Finally I sigh. The End


2 comments:

  1. Hi Joshvaa, Adele here..what a cool short narrative. Your story captured my interest, wondering what would happen to the fish's wings. I'm glad that they were all ok in the end.

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